问题标题：
我的第2篇英文日记,比较幼稚请大家帮我指正错误!itismondaytodayanditiscloudyday!Iwokeupat5clockthismorning,butididnotgetupimmediately!Ilaidonbedforonehourandcouldnotsleepagain!Ithoughtalotofthin
更新时间：2024-04-19 09:56:42
问题描述：
我的第2篇英文日记,比较幼稚请大家帮我指正错误!
itismondaytodayanditiscloudyday!
Iwokeupat5clockthismorning,butididnotgetupimmediately!
Ilaidonbedforonehourandcouldnotsleepagain!
Ithoughtalotofthings,whichincludesomeunhappythings,
sadmemories,andsomethingaboutmyfuture!
Ifeelnotverygood!
itwassixclockwhenigotup,outsideofthewindowwasrainning!Ihadbreakfastinlowspirits
ifeelloseaboutmylife,Idon‘tknowwhaticandointhe
future!
Afterawhile,icontinuetoreadmyenglishbook!
maybe,itistheonlythingsthatishoulddonow!
就写这些了
一定又有很多语法问题
石敏超回答：
改过的地方被我用“【】”标记了,应该能看懂吧?
【It】【was】【Monday】todayandit【was】【cloudy】!
Iwokeupat5【o'clock】thismorning,butididnotgetupimmediately!
I【stayedinbed】foronehourandcouldnotsleepagain!
Ithought【for】alotofthings,which【included】someunhappythings,【suchas】sadmemories,andsomethingaboutmyfuture!
I【didn'tfeel】verygood!
【It】wassixclockwhen【I】gotup,【outside】thewindowwasrainning!Ihadbreakfastinlowspirits.【Ifeltlost】aboutmylife,I【didn't】knowwhat【Ishould】dointhefuture!
Afterawhile,【Icontinued】toreadmy【English】book!
【Maybe】,it【was】theonly【thing】that【I】shoulddo【atthatmoment】!
